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The Queens have overthrown the Kings
The Jester's gone astray
The twos and threes are on their knees
You've no more cards to play.
In fear you'll run and try to hide
Your sanity and health
You'll close your eyes and realise
You're running from yourself.
For fear spreads like a wildfire
A cancer of the mind
The dark it bring will burn your wings
And soon you're running blind.
When it seems hope's disappeared
You'll turn your thoughts in prayer
From your cocoon you'll face the moon
And find your Angel's there.
Her silhouette against the stars
Strikes faith into your heart
She watches you, you rise anew
As fear starts to depart.
You spread your wings of sunset gold
A phoenix from the fire
Your soul takes flight into the night
A new star to admire.
The darkness starts to clear now
Yet the sun is still to rise
With no regret, her silhouette's
An Angel in your eyes.
©2005-2009 ~alexandrajane
:iconalexandrajane:

Author's Comments

pretty self explanitory really, i think so anyway. wrote it as a break from studying after getting inspiration from music. started as a collection of random already written phrases mostly pulled together into a poem *shrugs*

DAMN MY LIBRARY BOOK IS OVERDUE GODDAMMIT

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:iconx-jak-x:
wow alex. thats beautiful. very inspiring. :+fav: defenitely. i luv it

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Daybreak took away
The magic of dreams,
Fragments of apparitions
That became
More tangible that words -
Echoes and reflections
Of the trust
That men had bartered
For silence
:icontheslitwrists:
that's amazing :wow: truly a piece of art work :)

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:aww:

pew pew pew
:iconalexandrajane:
I'm glad you liked it!i wouldnt really call it artwork, it doesnt deserve that much credit for the time i spent on it. :blush: but thanks for the comment, really appreciate your oppinion! :D

Thanks!

~alexandrajane
:iconalexandrajane:
*grins* thanks!!! glad it is liked, not much effort went into it, was gonna put it in scraps :S i suppose it is kinda inspiring

thanks for the fav jess!!!

~alexandrajane
:iconchazzeh:
bout frickin time! lol sorry.... u jus hvnt posted anything in ages id leave a structured comment but iv had my 6 exams and iv been playing d2 ever since i got back from ancient and im tired. so gnight! or well gmorning actually its 12:41 am

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-ChaZ-

::I hate the presence of people, which I do not tolerate::
:iconskarteh:
Wow that really is good I could never sew words together like that even slowly... As if in a rush :( I love the start too :) very...you.

I didnt see it as inspiring it seems to me more of a description of the feeling of anxiety or when stress overcomes you then collecting your thoughts and calming down and relief... Sort of. Yes i cant explain what im trying to say i got from it but it is a very accurate - albeit metaphorical in parts - description of the latter.. But Im probably wrong. Usually am when its you =P

And no youll actually find that your not going to put it in scraps. It turns out youre going to leave it as a deviation. Arnt you a good girl!

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- SKaRT -
:icontheslitwrists:
:giggle: it's not a problem at all!! and i would call it art work :nod: art is art.. no matter the time spent on it :)

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pew pew pew

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